Thread:Dayne Dariel/@comment-30269371-20160930015239/@comment-27247962-20160930061324

Very good for a complete page.

Check your grammar, you don't need to make sentences to make the page look full, so don't try to add too much subjective reasonings in the page. (For example: he claims he rather just chim in and add to a conversation, rather than lead or start a conversation, which also implies him having a submissive personality. --> From the conversations he has had, we can clearly distinguish a submissive personality or just plainly 'He has a submissive personality' - rest is garbage that doesn't need to be in there