Talk:Ken Kaneki/@comment-3173617-20160920234705/@comment-76.5.87.80-20160922021927

^ Now, to be fair, this one is an improvement. There are far fewer "probablys," "maybes," and "what ifs." The only real negative here is how stubbornly she clung to it, instead of accepting that it was illogical and going back to the drawing board when presented with reasons why it wouldn't make sense.