Thread:Jassim Al-Madeh/@comment-137.141.244.214-20140323131000

First of all, thanks for the effort trying to fill out all the articles but your choice of words and grammar is very lacking. "However, the manager of Anteiku, Yoshimura, stopped her and lent Kaneki human meat."

Can be shorten to: "However, manager Yoshimura stopped Touka and instead offered to assist the ghoul."

"When Hinami was locking herself in a room in Anteiku, Touka visited her and gave her a newspaper contains the ghoul investigator Ippei's death."

Can be rewritten as "When Hinami confined herself to mourn, Touka talks to her and hands out a newspaper in a attempt to counsel her."

So far some of the articles needs fixing, Please try to proofread your work before overwriting some of the articles that has already been filled. Thank you. 