Talk:Ken Kaneki/@comment-26476324-20150621082242/@comment-26409128-20150621163446

Well, you could always change it. And if you want critique now I hope I can help you.

Like make a character that fits in the whole Tokyo Ghoul universe. Usually they are not black and white. Good and evil. Take characters who are already in the series as an example. Touka who killed humans but did regret it and just wanted to live a normal life. Ayato or Nishiki who seem like 'assholes' but actually have a good heart. Maybe add in some Investigator characters, too. They usually aren't bland and one-sided characters, either. (Amon or Shinohara for example).

Concerning power: Characters like Eto and Yoshimura have a Kakuja and are really strong. But they are rather exceptions than the norm. And then there are characters like Shachi who only has one Bikaku tail and is really strong. Again take other characters who are already in the series as an example. If they have a dual Kagune type for example leave it like that (Hinami and Nutcracker) otherwise it would be too much. Or let them have a Kagune with more tails/blades/whatever than usual (Miza and Ryouko).