Talk:Kagune/@comment-73.195.177.181-20150306215355

I've been obsessed with the idea of a genetically inhanced ghoul with glowing blue eyes instead of red. I even came up with my own character! Back story- Average day NY, USA. A young boy is walking home from school, but he wasn't a normal child. The boy was a ten years old ghoul named Aaron. As he walked home Aaron passed one of the many alleys in NYC. Just as the alley went out of sight, Aaron heard a low growling sound. He stopped, wanting to see what was the source of the sound. Aaron looked into the alley only to see a lone figure, a dog, a German Shepard stray stood before him in the alley. Fearlessly Aaron took a step toward the dog. The Shepard's growl became furious and savage-like. Aaron with his love of canines had no intention of causing the dog harm, and left it with a warning. Aaron took a deep breath in and mimicked the dog's growl only with more savageness (foreshadowing), startling the dog and sending it hiding in fear. Aaron then started back on his way home. As Aaron drew near to his home, he saw smoke rising from down the street, in the direction of his house!!! Aaron dropped his backpack and burst into a dash towards his home. He stopped at the corner of the block and fell to his knees. His house was on fire, but the firefighters weren't doing anything about it. The were just sitting there watching. While Aaron was in shock. Two figures walked out of the front door of his house. Aaron smiled expecting it to be his parents. His eyes widened as Aaron saw not his parents, by CCG Invesigaters emerge from the building, with patches of blood and ash on their white coats. Tears rolled down his eyes as Aaron slowly came to grips with what had happened. His parents were dead, killed by "Doves". Aaron watched as the Investigators gave the thumbs up to the firefighters to put out the fire. Aaron couldn't hold in his rage and despair any longer, he screamed with anguish. Everyone around his home turned to him, including the investigators. As she saw him one of Aaron's neighbors said to the investigators, " That's their son! Get him before he hurts us!" Aaron heard her words and realized that he should of stayed hidden. The Investigators started his way, and Aaron turned around and burst into a frantic run. He ran as fast as he could but wherever he went the doves were close behind. As he ran Aaron heard a loud click sound from behind him. Still running Aaron turned around, only to see one of the doves reveal her ukaku quinque and fire at him. Being a bikaku Aaron was in big trouble. The investigator used her quinque to shoot shards at Aaron. The shards pierced Aaron's back, knocking him to the ground. Aaron layer motionless on the cold cement waiting for them to get closer or go away. To Aaron's dismay the doves closed in and were soon standing over him. He waited, listening to see what would happen next. As they stood over him the other investigator said, "would you look at that, he's playing possum!" Aaron, shocked by how easily the dove saw through his farce, panicked! He released his black dog tail-like bikuka kagune (more foreshadowing), and swung at the investigators, hitting the one that mocked him while the ukuka user jumped out of the way in time. Aaron using the separation to his advantage got up and darted away from his two pursuers. As Aaron reached about a block in distance between the doves and himself ,a SWAT car rammed into him as he crossed the street, sending him flying through an adjacent store window knocking him out. To be continued...