Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-24494906-20160207225231

After checking a lot of edits, here is a rule of thumb:

Whenever you write "is shown", "is seen", "is revealed", "a flashback reveals", "in a flashback", etc., think about it once more. These expressions indicate bad style, because the story is the subject of your writing. Instead, the characters should be the subjects you write about. 