Thread:Ahendra/@comment-24494906-20160115202553/@comment-16729840-20160120084250

Harostar, i guess u missed the point to what im trying to say here.

its okay if you insist on grammars & verbatims i hate to point the other's mistake to prove my point. but let me bring the shorter example from above, which is being added after your warning in comment section

''He briefly cuts Shachi, although his wounds heal almost immediately. He then proceeds to stab him consecutively, and finally downs the ghoul. He happily says "let me take it away", wanting to cannibalize Shachi, however, Shachi quickly gets up, grabs Kaneki by the head, and pummels him into the floor.''

does this sentences were correct according to Wikipedia manual of writing of News style and summary style? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Writing_better_articles#Information_style_and_tone

This what i meant was making the article bloated.