Thread:DraculaCronqvist/@comment-10733658-20170421013601/@comment-10733658-20170421022409

The information is not true, as it involves a ton of speculation about the scene. Literally the only thing that happens is that Akira pictures her father saying her name. The rest of the scene is Akira speaking to Touka in the present.

There's also this issue:

"He later combined her kagune with that of her husband’s, making a newer quinque, Fueguchi Two."

This is wrong, plain and simple. Fueguchi One and Fueguchi Two are completely separate, individual Quinque. They are not a Chimera Quinque, as you wrote there.

Long and short, the majority of your edits are written with a very personal, guessing tone. Articles should be written in an Academic manner, with a neutral tone and little to no guesswork involved.