Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-26365870-20151208070657/@comment-50.46.151.9-20160107050617

Hmmmm I've been working on an oc for a bit, let's see if this is acceptable and how i can improve

Rc Type: Koukaku

Owner: Hanae Akioka (Alias "Rose Vein")

Described shape: resembles thin tree braches with thinner limbs branching off, thorn and leaf shaped appearing on the kangune as well (though they're not really small, there are not many of them)

Organic Color: (I understand if the coloring isn't acceptable) the base and the limbs are black but the leaf and thorn shapes of the kangune are a red with a faint pink hue to them

Unique capability: when she's not using her koukaku full heartedly ther're just simple black tendrils, only when she activated the smaller limbs and thorns do they harden (so she often only does this when protecting herself and rarely on the offence with them in this condition)

Kakuhou Number: 2

Rc Cell Number: 5200 +? (I'm not quite sure, suggestions would be highly appreciated)

Evolution: Since Hanae has a lot of expririence with her kangune she actually went through an evolution (the first stage being solid black kangune with little almost unnoticable buds). A potiental evolution further however could potentially be that she loses the smaller limbs and uses them to form bigger thorns and a thicker base (since the smaller limbs put her at risk, they aren't the sturdiest when the rc cells form and branch off in several places at once)

Trivia: Rose Vien's alias wasn't given until her thorns formed, reminding most of the thorns on a rose. She has an obsession with making herelf stronger but is currently debating if she should stop trying to evove her kangune, worried that she may not be able to weild them with much efficiency. Hanae got her kangune from her father who had similar styled kangune, however this also passes the disadvantage that despite her talent to branch off her kangune so much, the more vulnerable they are to snapping at too great of contact.

I hope this isn't too bad, if you spot a flaw or need clarification please tell me. I'm all open for ideas an constructive critisism if it makes my character improved into a balanced one