Talk:Tokyo Ghoul: Jail/@comment-25368268-20150424001347/@comment-24494906-20150618153519

What the director did is the following:

Ishida's draft had the story progression Aogiri arc end -> Cochlea arc -> new Kanou arc -> new Anteiku arc

The shit director decided to cut out the one arc you must not cut out: The Kanou arc.

As a result
 * Ishida's Cochlea arc and the story progression into it had to be scrapped. Completely.
 * Obviously, the transition into the Kanou arc had to be scrapped, too, since the arc did no longer exist.
 * Conversely, the transition out of the Kanou arc into the Anteiku arc had to be scrapped, too.
 * The only thing that could have survived would have been the ending, but the scriptwriter gave an interview where he said that they scrapped that, too.

So in short, almost nothing from Ishida's draft survived the butchering. The scriptwriter was the poor guy who had to pay for the director's crap: He was sitting there in August, had nothing to work on, since Ishida's draft became useless through the shit decisions of the director, and had to draft a new story while writing the screenplays within a month. Obviously, the result of this has to be super-crap.

So I won't call this Ishida's story, because the only things left from the draft are: Kaneki joins Aogiri, Aogiri attacks Cochlea, CCG attacks Anteiku, and Kaneki "dies".