Thread:Ahendra/@comment-24494906-20160115202553/@comment-10733658-20160120070839

Well, the length is really secondary to the quality of the article. Shortening and condensing a paragraph really doesn't help, when it's full of errors.

For example, I notice you often tweak sentences or paragraphs, but don't adjust the tenses when doing so. You need to be mindful about making sure that the entire paragraph is written in the same tense, otherwise it reads like a huge mess.