Talk:Re: Chapter 97/@comment-27247962-20161016211208/@comment-27915436-20161017021759

i'm not pleased by how things r handled, but i think dat goes only to say how bad Ishida made them, so i wouldn't point it as a demerit to ur story. now, y would Amon have his arata at dis point? it makes no sense, i honestly doubt u can sell me dat but pls give it a try if u will :3

and wut happened to ur english?