Thread:Old McDonald/@comment-24259054-20140320113300

Chapter 1 summary need to be edited even more... I think it should be shorter too. Since I'm not very good in English, It would be good if there is an example to follow.

About the characters' debut, I think it should when the characters first appear even if they didn't get intoruced yet, right?

I want to inform you that I'm going to start with the main characters' plot and relationships. 