Thread:AkagiSan/@comment-27379596-20160404204614

Furuta starts to provoke Sasaki about why he would help an incarcerated ghoul, he tells Furuta to stand down, but Furuta tells his former boss that he will miss his oh so full face. He then charges at Sasaki with Rotten Follow, He dodges the attack appearing behind Furuta. He then kicks the quinque from his hand, Furuta then grabs a hold of his leg and tries to cut him with Rotten Follow. In response, Sasaki dodges the attack then slams Furuta face first into the wall, knocking a tooth lose. While Furuta is rolling on the ground, Sasaki follows up with a downward kick which he dodges. Furuta attempts to counter by attacking Sasaki's eyes, but Hinami intervenes and impales Furuta through the back with her kagune. Sasaki and Hinami then continue towards their escape, leaving Furuta for dead.

I would like to know if this version is better than the current one, and or what I should change. 