Thread:Ahendra/@comment-24494906-20160115202553/@comment-16729840-20160120073207

okay then, i wont criticize about any real life activities since i know myself it was personal and everyone had different priorities or free times.

lets just change the subject with more constructive one.

i suggest if we should evaluate together as example the paragraph from Kanou section

Later on, Madam A leads them to a mansion where Kanou is supposed to reside. While investigating the house, Banjou finds the basement and informs Kaneki about it. He asks Madam A if that place really is Kanou's mansion as she previously said. She says that she is positive, and Kaneki threatens her with attack, accidentally crushing the wall and exposing a strange organic structure revealed to be the "RC Cell Wall" also known as "24th Ward's Wall". While going further into the Mansion's underground, they encounter various remains of Kanou's failed experiments, finally encountering the twins, again. Kaneki simply states that he has no time to deal with them, and jumps over them, further rushing into the mansion's base, while leaving others to deal with Kurona and Nashiro. After leaving his comrades, he eventually encounters Shachi, who goes to attack him immediately. He is successful in dodging many various attacks Shachi throws at him, and sees the opportunity to charge at him swiftly and blind him temporarily. However, Shachi dodges it, and seeing that he has no chance in close combat, Kaneki activates his kakugan, as well as his kagune. He briefly cuts Shachi, although his wounds heal almost immediately. He then proceeds to stab him consecutively, and finally downs the ghoul. He happily says "let me take it away", wanting to cannibalize Shachi, however, Shachi quickly gets up, grabs Kaneki by the head, and pummels him into the floor. Kaneki&#039;s encounter with Kanou

Kaneki's encounter with Kanou.

He gets up, questioning how powerful Shachi really is, only to see Kanou, standing at the top of the kakuhou farm chamber, revealing Rize in it. He learns about Kanou's ideals, how he wants to "free" the mankind trapped in the cage, the only salvation being ghouls. Kaneki angrily states that no sane mane could do such thing, and that his life was hell after Kanou made him what he currently is. Kanou says that he gave up in living in a world of man, and that if Kaneki wants to live in the ghoul world, it would be prudent to join hands with ghouls. Kaneki immediately questions the offering, but Kanou says that he will show him the "true world" that is out there, before stating that the actual reason for the Aogiri tree's formation is a ghoul named "Yoshimura". Kaneki, shocked, looks helplessly at Kanou, while he tries to convince him to join his side. Their conversation is soon interrupted by Renji, who breaks in and grabs Rize, saying that Kaneki should follow the path he's decided upon, and escapes after informing him that "doves" tracked Kanou and are coming into the mansion. Shachi quickly overwhelms him again, saying that he's no match for him, and grabs Kanou. Kanou lets failed experiments attack Kaneki, and says that he looks forward to the day they meet again. Confused, broken and hurt, Kaneki proceeds in cannibalizing the experiments, saying that all this time, he was trying to hide his weakness in order to protect what's important to him, but no more. Shinohara vs. Kaneki

When CCG breaks in and enters the underground, Shinohara encounters Kaneki, although he states that his kagune now looks just like a centipede. In his kakuja half-form, Kaneki quickly turns to him and immediately charges at the said investigator. Shinohara prepares his blade sword quinque, evades, and activates Arata's armor. While he does that, Kaneki mumbles mindless words, possibly from the effect his kakuja has on him. He continues in jumping around walls looking for a chance to engage Shinohara, and when he finally does so, Shinohara cuts the right side of his abdomen with his quinque. Kaneki falls to his knees, and while his kakuja was cut, he activates his 6 tailed kagune, and swiftly charges at Shinohara once more, catching him off guard and completely immobilizing him. When Amon enters the room where Shinohara and Kaneki are in, he sees Kaneki feasting on what appears to be Shinohara's corpse. Angry and confused, Amon fiercely charges at Kaneki, while the latter blocks his quinque with kagune. After more investigators arrive, they label Kaneki as SS-rated ghoul, deciding not to drag Amon down whilst in fight and join it if needed. Juuzou arrives, cutting Kaneki with his quinque as well, followed by Amon's final strike at Kaneki, finally bringing the half-ghoul to his knees. Instead of continuing to fight, Kaneki simply says "I don't want to eat anymore." and runs away. He's later seen to have successfully escaped the fight, and when Banjou offers help to Kaneki, he immediately stabs Banjou through the chest. He again enters the mindless state, questioning why he strived to become strong and why did he have to throw away his humanity, constantly uttering "I'm sorry". He finally calms down, with his kakuja mask falling off his face.

how do we treat this one?

from me personally its still full of figurative citation of words, beside the im still noticing the repetitiveness of Kaneki being lost of control at least twice.

of course its not necessarily to be solved at once. or we could discuss this in the forum if its better to involve this with another members