Thread:Old McDonald/@comment-24259054-20140320113300/@comment-24494906-20140321154203

About Hinami's page: I think the length is just right. I changed a bit of the wording. In reported speech, you sometimes didn't change the tense. Also, you slightly overused the word "then".

I think it's better not to use the first name for all characters in these summaries. I would use what they are most often called by in the manga. For example, the reader may not know that Mado's first name is Kureo. That just leads to unnecessary confusion.

Thanks for your work!