Thread:Old McDonald/@comment-10733658-20141218235444/@comment-10733658-20141219003815

Okay, I'll try to follow that guideline and give it another shot.

''The revelations of Chapter 5 leave numerous unanswered questions concerning Tooru Mutsuki. It is revealed that he was born and was raised as a girl, a fact verified by his official profile. However, a flashback reveals that he experienced feelings of discomfort related to living as a woman and could not explain the reasons behind these feelings. As such, when taken in by CCG, he requested to live as a man. (ref ch.5 goes here) Since then, he has lived with a fully male identity -- wearing men's clothing, using the men's restrooms (ref ch.2), and being referred to using masculine pronouns. It is speculated but unconfirmed whether Mutsuki is a Transgender man or a woman passing as a man. However, to accurately reflect Mutsuki's request and treatment in the series, masculine pronouns are used within the article.''

Better?