Thread:Old McDonald/@comment-25535807-20141101233027/@comment-24494906-20141101235334

I just skimmed through the last one. I think you don't have to paraphrase every bubble, but it's mostly fine.

Are you already working on the chapter 4's summary?

Just a remark about chapter 4: The chapter title is 未と師、視と屍. This title doesn't even make much sense in Japanese, but I'll give you an interpretation (derived from interpretations developed at 2ch).

未と師 = not yet and master/teacher (literally), so either "still less than master/teacher" or "not yet a master/teacher" 視と屍 = vision and corpse (literally), so "examining the corpses" reading is "mitoshi, mitoshi"

Then there is a theory floating at 2ch that Ishida now makes Engrish puns: You either have to take the Japanese reading or the English translation and then add "re/ri" in front. For this chapter, it would be "rimitoshi, rimitoshi". And if you really squinch your eyes, you end up with Engrish "remit to see, limit to see". In previous chapters, this Engrish meaning was much more obvious, so I'm unsure if this is the intended Engrish pun (because of the small sample of titles, it's not even really certain yet if this is really the way Ishida constructs puns now), but I think you should know about it.