Talk:Ken Kaneki/@comment-26476324-20150621082242/@comment-213.66.199.45-20150621125712

^ Okay, found and checked them out...

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You... really need to do some more work on your writer-skills... and there´s way too many kakujas for a pair of one-shot ghouls...

and some of the oc´s are far to extreme to be realistic, jsut saying, the reader loses interest fast in these people if they´re too op from the start and are on a extreme spot of the moral spectrum...

I get the feeling that these OC´s are overdone to appear interesting, the problem is, they´re overdone in the wrong way.

Ghouls are people after all, so for a believable OC, you need to think and ask yourself "How would a normal person react and be to these things?"

That´s the charm with a oc if it´s done right, the synch with the reader.

just pointing it out.