Thread:Crazy Suzy/@comment-27247962-20161108175913/@comment-27247962-20161108194715

Did you already pen down part of the story?

You keep astounding me, Suzy-chan. Although it pains me that you left me hanging in regards to the other half of my comment, but I get it, it's not very private.

Back on topic. I like where it's going, but I can't help but say you seem overly focused on adding disorders to keep up the tragedy. You should work on that or expand the tragedy to emotional complications, besides the complications of having a disorder or getting one.

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