Thread:Dayne Dariel/@comment-25787298-20160626130511/@comment-28129688-20160701184629

Alright. You want critisim, here we go...

First... Try drawing with cleaner lines.. That way the drawing would look better..

Second.. The hair.. Try using a darker pencil for that.. A 4B pencil would be good. Coz he looks kind of bald to me (idk if he's meant to be thay wayxD) and fix the nose...

Third.. Try to improve your shading skills...

Then just keep on practicing (draw daily and from life) it should improve your skills :) try watching proko on youtube.. Lots of helpful tutorials there.