Talk:Clowns/@comment-25256870-20140922030040/@comment-4189484-20140922032940

What you wrote was fine for a blog post. But when it comes to a page, you should write formally and leave out all the conjecture like ".... Mado wouldn't have died. Touka and Hinami probably would've, though." Or stuff like "and I'm sure Pierrot would've had a good laugh about that." (I'm on a wiki page is a big no-no. You never use that unless you're the sole author of this page, and no, you are a contributor.)

That is exactly the kind of stuff you would write in your own blog post or an episode review. I edited it so that it's a lot more appropriate; I don't mean any offense by this.