Talk:Re: Chapter 88/@comment-71.75.134.142-20160806080512/@comment-27247962-20160806152138

A few flashbacks to make it a bit more physical and real for the reader wouldn't have hurt imo.

Although this is a build up fight, it's gone and done with quite easily, don't yet want to say 'brushed off', but it's rather close for a face-off with such a long build-up.

I didn't feel anything, except finding Tatara's kakujadesign intriguing, but regarding their face-off, it didn't do much with me.

So yeah I think that lacking build-up (keeping it just at the occasional angry shout, instead of using afterimages of what caused this grudge) is still more ridiculous then being able to breath fire & the fire-breathing is ridiculous as well, so figure it out.