Thread:Dayne Dariel/@comment-25787298-20160626130511/@comment-25787298-20160702213341

White-kun wrote: Alright. You want criticism, here we go...

First... Try drawing with cleaner lines.. That way the drawing would look better..

Second.. The hair.. Try using a darker pencil for that.. A 4B pencil would be good. Coz he looks kind of bald to me (idk if he's meant to be that wayxD) and fix the nose...

Third.. Try to improve your shading skills...

Then just keep on practicing (draw daily and from life) it should improve your skills :) try watching proko on youtube.. Lots of helpful tutorials there. I was just sketching, so I didn't concern myself with the shading. Its funny you mention 4B, I was thinking about using that shade, but I honestly was thinking perhaps 6B.

The shading also had little effort. Its generally an unfinished product. That is why the lines are so rough, although I do admit to not being good with a pen for that very reason.

Honestly, the nose is the only criticism I wasn't already aware of.

Finally, I draw all day. I've been sketching alot lately though, because I'm practicing storyboards. I intend on releasing a series within a year. I'm going to be practicing manuscripts soon, which is where I'll get my shading practice in. I watch Mark Crilley and Draw with Jazza. Who or what is Proko?